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Title: Prowl's Epicly Short Adventure to Locate Jazz
Day: 11
Prompt: Snowbots
Rating: G
Other Characters: (well, most of them are just standing around as wallflowers BUT--) Bumblebee, Perceptor, Gears, Ratchet, Sideswipe, Sunstreaker, Bluestreak, Cliffjumper, Sludge, Wheeljack, Brawn, Blaster, and Windcharger...I think that's everyone o_o
Warnings: Snowy fluff. Eskimo kissing, kinda? *shrugs*
Summary: Jazz is late for their game night. Prowl goes out in search of him.
Notes: Done for [livejournal.com profile] prowlxjazz's Delightful December challenge. I apologize in advance for the crappy lines and the somewhat crappy coloring. My scanner likes to eat shading for dessert and I can't do a straight line to save my life. =_= Also, don't try to make any sense of the board game on Prowl's desk -- I made it up on the spot. As for why there isn't any "proper" speech bubbles, I thought I'd try something different. I think it works for this :3




















Date: 2010-12-12 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xaefryl.livejournal.com
That was a very cute comic. I really enjoyed reading it! I liked the 'picture in a speechbox' dialogue; very fun!

Date: 2010-12-12 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it xD

Date: 2010-12-12 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepheonixqueen.livejournal.com
Wow! Very cute! But now I wonder who helped jazz bury himself in snow! poor prowl walked right into his trap!

Date: 2010-12-12 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
Thanks! I had the idea that Jazz roped Mirage and Bumblebee into setting the trap (hence Bumblebee pointing Prowl in the right direction) but I just ran out of time @_@

Date: 2010-12-12 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] synaltern.livejournal.com
I'll be the third cute 'caller', here. So sweet!

Date: 2010-12-12 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
Heheh, I'm glad you enjoyed! :D

Date: 2010-12-12 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sideslip-tf.livejournal.com
Snicker. Very clever. I liked it.

Date: 2010-12-12 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed :3

Date: 2010-12-12 04:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renegadewriter8.livejournal.com
AHAHAHAHAHA Oh this was love! Oh Jazz, you had Prowl so worried that you didn't show up! LOL Loved the scene in the rec room, Sunny punching Sideswipe and everyone laughing, even the Hatchet!!

Awww I just looked through it again, Jazz's visor glinting in mischief is win! Great job!

Date: 2010-12-12 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much! xD

Yes, Sunstreaker does not appreciate it when Sideswipe approaches him with strange organic material and tries to emulate the odd humans rituals.

Date: 2010-12-12 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naggingfishwife.livejournal.com
Oh GREAT job! I know how time-consuming and labor-intensive it is to draw out comics. I love this!

Date: 2010-12-12 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yeah, I haven't done something this big in awhile so it was like flexing out old, forgotten muscles. Had lots of fun drawing so much, even with all the hand cramps :D

Date: 2010-12-12 10:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wicked3659.livejournal.com
Eeeee I really liked this! Very cute and Jazz is such a devious bot :3 i hope Prowl appreciates his efforts :D

Date: 2010-12-12 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
So glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Jazz was so very impressed with his own deviousness. Prowl, less so, but he'll look back at it and laugh :3

Date: 2010-12-12 12:28 pm (UTC)
artemis10002000: (skywarp)
From: [personal profile] artemis10002000
Awwwww! So cuite and funny! What a beautiful comic! It must have been so much work to draw the comic, thank you very much for sharing!

Date: 2010-12-12 09:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
I'm glad you like it so much! :D

Date: 2010-12-12 03:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluebirdsoaring.livejournal.com
This is such a riot!!! The details you put in each little section, right down to Jazz jumping Prowl =) My favroite bit is Jazz sitting there with Prowl in the snow, both looking so peaceful!! Very well done!!

Date: 2010-12-12 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

Date: 2010-12-12 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] runyasan08.livejournal.com
that was ADORABLE ♥♥

Date: 2010-12-12 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed it! x3

Date: 2010-12-12 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raisedbymoogles.livejournal.com
Awwww, that's adorable! *squees* I love how you only used dialogue at the end. Prowl's thoughts at the beginning were very expressive. XD

Date: 2010-12-14 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad that Prowl's thoughts got across clearly without any 'real' dialogue :D

Date: 2010-12-14 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
Glad you liked! %D

Date: 2010-12-13 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwenithcoy.livejournal.com
LOL, that was adorable! :)

Date: 2010-12-14 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

Date: 2010-12-16 03:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/__wilderness__/
That is adorable!

I love all the little side stories you have going on too. Plus, Sunstreaker KO'ing Sideswipe cracks me up.

PS: Your header intrigues me!
Edited Date: 2010-12-16 03:04 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-12-16 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-veneficus.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

The header, you say? That is the product of reading too many fics with crack pairings. I honestly have no idea how those two suddenly became one of mine OTPs, though, since neither of them were in any of the stories xD;
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