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Title: Prowl's Epicly Short Adventure to Locate Jazz
Day: 11
Prompt: Snowbots
Rating: G
Other Characters: (well, most of them are just standing around as wallflowers BUT--) Bumblebee, Perceptor, Gears, Ratchet, Sideswipe, Sunstreaker, Bluestreak, Cliffjumper, Sludge, Wheeljack, Brawn, Blaster, and Windcharger...I think that's everyone o_o
Warnings: Snowy fluff. Eskimo kissing, kinda? *shrugs*
Summary: Jazz is late for their game night. Prowl goes out in search of him.
Notes: Done for [livejournal.com profile] prowlxjazz's Delightful December challenge. I apologize in advance for the crappy lines and the somewhat crappy coloring. My scanner likes to eat shading for dessert and I can't do a straight line to save my life. =_= Also, don't try to make any sense of the board game on Prowl's desk -- I made it up on the spot. As for why there isn't any "proper" speech bubbles, I thought I'd try something different. I think it works for this :3




















Date: 2010-12-12 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xaefryl.livejournal.com
That was a very cute comic. I really enjoyed reading it! I liked the 'picture in a speechbox' dialogue; very fun!

Date: 2010-12-12 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepheonixqueen.livejournal.com
Wow! Very cute! But now I wonder who helped jazz bury himself in snow! poor prowl walked right into his trap!

Date: 2010-12-12 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] synaltern.livejournal.com
I'll be the third cute 'caller', here. So sweet!

Date: 2010-12-12 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sideslip-tf.livejournal.com
Snicker. Very clever. I liked it.

Date: 2010-12-12 04:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renegadewriter8.livejournal.com
AHAHAHAHAHA Oh this was love! Oh Jazz, you had Prowl so worried that you didn't show up! LOL Loved the scene in the rec room, Sunny punching Sideswipe and everyone laughing, even the Hatchet!!

Awww I just looked through it again, Jazz's visor glinting in mischief is win! Great job!

Date: 2010-12-12 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naggingfishwife.livejournal.com
Oh GREAT job! I know how time-consuming and labor-intensive it is to draw out comics. I love this!

Date: 2010-12-12 10:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wicked3659.livejournal.com
Eeeee I really liked this! Very cute and Jazz is such a devious bot :3 i hope Prowl appreciates his efforts :D

Date: 2010-12-12 12:28 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] artemis10002000
Awwwww! So cuite and funny! What a beautiful comic! It must have been so much work to draw the comic, thank you very much for sharing!

Date: 2010-12-12 03:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluebirdsoaring.livejournal.com
This is such a riot!!! The details you put in each little section, right down to Jazz jumping Prowl =) My favroite bit is Jazz sitting there with Prowl in the snow, both looking so peaceful!! Very well done!!

Date: 2010-12-12 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] runyasan08.livejournal.com
that was ADORABLE ♥♥

Date: 2010-12-12 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raisedbymoogles.livejournal.com
Awwww, that's adorable! *squees* I love how you only used dialogue at the end. Prowl's thoughts at the beginning were very expressive. XD

Date: 2010-12-13 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwenithcoy.livejournal.com
LOL, that was adorable! :)

Date: 2010-12-16 03:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/__wilderness__/
That is adorable!

I love all the little side stories you have going on too. Plus, Sunstreaker KO'ing Sideswipe cracks me up.

PS: Your header intrigues me!
Edited Date: 2010-12-16 03:04 pm (UTC)
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